Saturday, December 31, 2016






FAITHFULNESS

 

…That is my new word for 2017. A word to be studied, experienced, and felt. A word to be savored and paid keen attention to. The faithfulness of God is to be appreciated and this is my promise—to stick with this word, meditate on the meaning and power and peace of this word. I want depth of my lack of understanding in this—more than a word—rather a character trait—to meet with the grace of the King of Kings. And then—bring Him Glory.

The idea to even find a word for every year came from the book called, ONE PERFECT WORD One WORD Can Make ALL the Difference by #1 New York Times Bestselling Author, Debbie Macomber.

Is this one of those New Year’s Eve resolutions? Even though this is the last day of 2016 this journey is hardly that. I began thinking about and picking this word on December 17th. After I choose “faithfulness” I dug into my store of available journals and discovered one that had a title, GREAT IS THY FAITHFULNESS PROMISE JOURNAL. Not only is there space for my scribblings, but quotes and scriptures on this theme are scattered throughout.

I already realize that His faithfulness will not always have the face that I expect or the expected end. I know that He is God and that He has all in control. But to experience this word shall be amazing. I know that Abraham and Sarah and Joseph and David etc. experienced this word and knew Him better for the journey. Oh, to be clay in my FATHER’S HANDS, may all the unwilling, hard places in my heart surrender well and quickly to His ministrations and loving grace.

WHAT IS YOUR WORD FOR THIS YEAR?

P. S. My sister gave me a bracelet with Psalm 46:10 engraved on inside this Christmas. Be still and know that I am God; I will be exalted among the nations, I will be exalted in the earth. Selah

And so the journey begins….  I wish you and yours a fabulous New Year in 2017!

Friday, November 18, 2016


DREAM TO…DESTINATION

Manitowoc Public Library – author/speaker Beth Ann Ziarnik

TUESDAY, NOVEMBER 29

6:00 p.m. - 8:00 p.m.

 
Pens of Praise Christian Writer’s Group is hosting a debut author event in the Balkansky Community Room A in Manitowoc Public Library.
 
 


Beth will share her writer’s journey and the adventures she experienced while researching her novel's setting in Munising and on Grand Island, MI. The event will include a book signing. She is a Wisconsin writer with local ties! Beth’s page-turning romantic suspense novel, Her Deadly Inheritance, has stayed on several Amazon bestselling lists since its release in January.


Find Beth online: 




 

Wednesday, November 16, 2016


PENS OF PRAISE

CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP

Let us know if your attending so we can save a seat just for you!

November 21, 2016

Monday 6:30 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.

Faith Free Church

2201 42nd St.

Manitowoc, WI  54220

 

“Bringing Your Story To Life” taught by Taya Schreiter is our next exciting teaching! Taya writes with imagination and spunk and she gracefully accepted the invitation to teach our November class. Bring pencil or pen and paper or your laptop for some writing exercises. Engage your mind in the who, what, where, when, why and how of story and be prepared to see your pages come to life under Taya’s direction!

 

“Breath of Life” or “For the Life of Me” or “Hello Adventure” are our prompt choices for this month, pick one and just have some fun. (I didn’t get to write to last month’s prompt! I thought I’d take a swing at it.) Write in the genre of your choice and share/or don’t share if you want to and if time allows. We are a safe group and for the last—8 or is it 9 years— no tomatoes have been thrown at the speakers or those sharing their latest work in progress!

 

Stop at a local coffee shop or bring your own coffee or soda and relax with us a while.

May the Lord bless your writing endeavors as you write for Him! Any concerns or questions feel free to contact susanmarlenekinney@gmail.com or rebeccamclafferty@gmail.com

 

Blessings!

 




 
 
 
 


Monday, October 17, 2016

Old Message - Fresh Revelation

 

 
 
 
Though the Bible is an old message, the wisdom rings true for today and tomorrow.  Becky McLafferty and myself are taking the challenge that many of our American Founding Fathers took. Reading the Bible through in a year.
I am behind on my reading because I've been luxuriating in the depth and pattern of relationships I see in these gold rimmed pages. I'm thrilled to have taken the challenge. The influence of this ancient wisdom touches my day by day decisions and goals.
How about you? Do you want a sweet adventure that is cushioned by wisdom that has proven true for ages? This message is guaranteed to be relevant time without measure...
 
Many of our Founding Fathers read through the Bible each year which effected their choices of what guidelines and freedoms our constitution provided for our country.
 
Thank you Annette for allowing your well loved Bible to pose for this post! You are an amazing teacher and your heart is made from the gold that is found inside these pages.
 
Like apples of gold in settings in silver is a word spoken in right circumstances. Proverbs 25:11 
 
For a better today and tomorrow.... 

Saturday, October 15, 2016


PENS OF PRAISE

CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP

Monday, October 17, 2016
6:30 p.m. – 8:30 p.m. 

Faith Church

2201  42nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220
   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods
   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43
 
“Drama, Drama, Drama & A Bit of Structure Too, Part 2” is our topic this month. Inspired by K.M. Weiland’s “Structuring Your Novel” Essential Keys for Writing an Outstanding Story and “Story Trumps Structure” by Steven James. Rebecca McLafferty and Susan Marlene will lead the class covering ACT II. Do not fear – topic outline will be provided, which also covers last month’s class, but bring your paper and pens for note taking! Are you ready to experience the amazing journey of structured plotting with the pacing and rhythm that your story thrives to embrace?

We are a safe place to share. We invite you to bring your WIP (Work in progress!) for a five minute read.

The prompt for this September is…
“Hello Adventure….”

Bring your favorite coffee or tea with you! Our precious Kathy Leist brings treats—we all appreciate her so! J

 
As always, if you have any questions or concerns don’t hesitate to contact  Becky McLafferty @ rebeccamclafferty@gmail.com or                                                             
 Susan Marlene@ susanmarlenewrites@gmail.com









Monday, September 12, 2016

Drama, Drama, Drama & A Bit of Structure Too





 
 

 
PENS OF PRAISE
CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP
September 19, 2016
Monday 6:30 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.
Faith Church
2201  42nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220
   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods
   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43
“Drama, Drama, Drama & A Bit of Structure Too” is our topic this month. Inspired by K.M. Weiland’s “Structuring Your Novel” Essential Keys for Writing an Outstanding Story. Susan Marlene will lead the class. Bring your paper and pens and be ready to take notes! Are you ready to experience the amazing journey of structured plotting with the pacing and rhythm that your story thrives to embrace?
We are a safe place to share. We invite you to bring your WIP (Work in progress!) for a five minute read.
The prompt for this September is…
“And the plot thickens….”
Bring your favorite coffee or tea with you! Our precious Kathy Leist brings treats—we all appreciate her so! J 
As always, if you have any questions or concerns don’t hesitate to contact Becky McLafferty @ rebeccamclafferty@gmail.com or
 
 


Sunday, August 21, 2016

WONDERFUL FLAVORS OF RESEARCH -- August Pens Meeting





WONDERFUL FLAVORS OF RESEARCH

Susan Marlene

Research can make your project shine and the lack thereof can lay waste to a perfectly great idea. Let’s consider the many flavors of research to strengthen your writing, be it fiction or non-fiction.

Agent WEB sites: Proposals/Writer Business set-up info * Free *                                                    
Here are some of the delicious nuggets these agents offer.


·       Links to their author blogs by name

·       Links to writers’ conferences

·       Proposal Info

·       Business for the writer

·       Editorial Services

·       Blog posts about writing topics


Resources and Chip’s Blog Info

·       Choosing An Agent

·       Submission Guidelines

·       Recommended Reading

·       Blog by Chip McGregor

Research Books:

Writing Business and Mechanics of Writing:

Book proposals that Sell by W.Terry Whalin; The Christian Writer’s Market Guide  Jerry B. Jenkins; The Elements of Style by Strunk/White/Kalman; Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Brown & King. The Little Red Writing Book by Brandon Royal; Punctuation Plain & Simple by Edgar C. Alward & Jean A. Alward. Various dictionaries.

Books on Plotting and or Technique:

Anything Donald Maass and or James Scott Bell. Structuring Your Novel by K.M. Weiland; Getting Into Character by Brandilyn Collins, Wired For Story by Lisa Cron; Story Trumps Structure by Steven James; From the Inside…Out   discover…create…and publish the novel in you! Susan May Warren and Rachel Hauck; Jeff Gerke “The Art & Craft of Writing Christian Fiction” and other books he has written.

Relationships & Psychology & Human Behavior:

The 5 Love Languages by Gary Chapman; Emotional Vampires by Albert J. Bernstein Ph. D.; Overcoming Emotions That Destroy by Ingram Johnson; What Every BODY is Saying by Joe Navarro with Marvin Karlins, Ph. D.; For Women Only by Shaunti Feldhahn;  For Parents Only by Shaunti Feldhahn and Lisa A. Rice; Psychology book; etc.

Spiritual Influence:

Bibles and Bible studies and reference books. Abingdon’s Strong’s Exhaustive Concordance of the Bible, Devotionals, Old history books with the character of our founding fathers. David Barton’s The Founder’s Bible

What is your genre?

Books available for the time period in which you’re writing. The technical or specific information you are writing about. (Rocket ships, horses pulling wagons, transportation, tools, food and clothing to match your stories time period.) Travel information and photos etc. J

Writing for Men or Women? 80% more women read fiction – it is a chemical thing. 

Look up brain chemicals that fire during fiction reading.

Inform from Jeff Gerke and Wired For Story

1)      Catch the reader’s attention.

Must convince reader your story is more interesting. Use Braine Science.

Ø  Danger—Self-preservation – JG.  Mirror neurons pg. 66 Wired For Story. “If you start with the mundane and ordinary the readers brain will move on to something else.” Quote from Jeff Gerke. Jane Austin – relationship danger to 007 danger.

Ø  Surprise-unexpected/humorous/ intriguing (reader surprise not necessarily the character.)

Ø  Appropriate TONE --for your story. (It could be the wrong start no matter how excellent it is written, because it doesn’t match the tone of the story.)

2)       Connect the reader to the character (s).

Ø  The emotional engagement “Your job as a writer is the have the reader become the character.” Dr. Zach…  Wired For Story pg. 67 states: “…readers mentally simulate each new situation encountered in narrative. Details about actions and sensations are captured from the text and integrated with personal knowledge from past experiences.”  Called Transportation – character is in a situation and you are feeling it…rapid heartbeat, sweaty hands/emotional or physical reaction.

Trick to transportation – character is vulnerable – releases oxytocin.

3)      Present a Story of Struggle
Internal and external which build as the story progresses.


Present a story of struggle. Let’s Make a “Tasty Fruit Salad of a Story Beginning” by creating delicious sentences from these basic boring ones. Use our research tools. Use these notes or the sample research books and any other information and I believe you will be amazed at the sparkle and flash you will discover in your writing sample today.

Sentence choices:

A.      Joyce ran to the store with her car. She shopped for special ingredients and checked her list to make sure she purchased everything. Tonight would be real special _______________________________________________________________________

B)      The unusual circumstances for amount of time he would be away were puzzling. After all he had special reasons for this trip ________________________________________________________________________

C)      Cats and rats and tomatoes? How could these have anything in common? And what was

 

____________________ to do with___________________________________________

 

      ________________________________________________________________________

D) It was a birthday like every other year. _________________________________________

 

*Add in a love language, goals, motivation, conflict and detail using strong nouns and verbs.

*Add in punctuation or twists or plot turns (watch out for our Kathy!) Okay everyone enjoy!

With great knowledge there is huge responsibility! Use your words wisely to build and not tear down. To bring truth and displace lies.

Realize that people, editors and agents want to be engaged in great story or helpful non-fiction. Let’s do our research, sprinkle it like a perfectly seasoned meal, and serve it out to the masses!