Saturday, April 16, 2016

Pens of Praise Christian Writers Group Meeting April



Pens of Praise
Christian Writers Group
  Monday, April 16th 2016    6:30 – 8:30
Faith Church
            Next to Festival         
 2201 42nd Street, Manitowoc, WI 54220 

                           Greetings all! We hope you are free this Monday, April 16th to attend. Bring your thinking caps! We will be exploring movie scripts to dissect dialogue, which is used to make stories matter, stand out, and absolutely sparkle!  We will look at a couple of movies such as: Star Wars: The Force Awakens and something I’ve not decided on yet. If your curiosity is aroused then you will have to come and see!

               The prompt this month was inspired by New York Times bestselling author, Elizabeth Berg. She was Manitowoc Public Library and LaDeDa Books & Bean’s guest speaker Monday, April 11th. She suggested this writing exercise…
Two oddly matched characters who don’t ‘get one another’ arguing. Make what you will of that! Isn’t that the fun of our prompt times.
                             
You are welcome to bring your ‘work in progress’ to share a small portion if you would like feedback from our group.  We hope to see you on April 16th, kick up your feet, take a seat, and smile with us a while!
If you have any questions feel free to contact Becky McLafferty at RebeccaMcLafferty@gmail.com or Susan Kinney at susanmarlenekinney@gmail.com
May God Bless you richly and always!

Tuesday, March 15, 2016

"Two Roads Home" A Chicory Inn Novel by Deborah Raney







Two Roads Home A Chicory Inn Novel by Deborah Raney
I was honored to receive Two Roads Home from Abingdon Press so that I could write an unbiased review.

Deborah Raney brings some home town family distress to the pages of her second novel in the Chicory Inn series. Not only are Audrey and Grant Whitman’s dream of owning and operating a bed and breakfast tarnishing a bit, but there is trouble with their eldest daughter’s family too.

 Deborah spins a tale which embraces parents of adult children, some of which have children of their own. This is a close knit family, who despite their love and loyalty struggle with negative attitudes and unfortunate situations that have to be dealt with or else!

When Jesse Pennington, Audrey and Grant’s son-in-law, is accused of sexual harassment by a disgruntled woman coworker the influence is felt throughout the family. Corinne and Jesse’s three young daughters safety is threatened…could the coworker have anything to do with that?  I’m not telling.

Deborah has successfully gotten into the thoughts and attitudes of this family in crisis. The tension builds…making one think about how they would feel and handle such a crisis if their character, family loyalty, and safety were attacked this way.  

Deborah Raney is an award winning author including the RITA, National Readers Choice Award, HOLT Medallion, and the Carol Award and has been a Christy Award finalist twice.

If you’re looking for a hometown wholesome read this is your book! In fact there is a free sample chapter for the third book in this series called Another Way Home. This series of novels include a group discussion guide for your readers group, which I believe connect with the reader in a practical way.

Questions for Deb:

1)  You hit on a very emotional topic when you brought in the sexual harassment accusation. What inspired you to take the novel in this direction?
    We often read about workplace sexual harassment involving men harassing women, but I thought it would be interesting to explore it from the point of view of a man who is falsely accused, and it’s actually the woman doing the harassing. It was an interesting and eye-opening topic to explore! 

2)  Were you tempted to write a silver lining in the middle of Jesse and Corinne’s difficulties?
    I’m always tempted to write silver linings! I’m a Pollyanna who really hates putting her characters in peril, hates seeing them suffer. But there’s no tension and no story if happy endings happen too soon!

3)  Do you still relate most to Audrey in this novel, like you did in Home to Chicory Lane? Yes Deb, I remembered from the previous interview we did from this first novel in the series!
    LOL! Thank you for remembering. Yes, Audrey, but I could also really relate to Corinne in this book. Especially her feelings of inferiority and envy where her sisters are concerned. I adore my own sisters, but often struggle with feeling that they are cuter, skinnier, more talented, etc. And they are both younger! So it was fun to explore those feelings in Corinne as well.

4)  You have a knack for getting inside your character’s heads. What experience in your life has aided you to develop that skill?
    It’s probably just the way I was raised. I can remember my mom often saying some form of,  “Just think how you’d feel if you were in their shoes!” It was her way of teaching us to be compassionate, and it serves me well in life—when I remember to apply it!

5)  What would you speak to a person when they instinctively suspect someone’s dangerous interest or actions, but cannot prove it?
    I think people need to know which direction they lean—too trusting, or too suspicious—before I could advise them. Bottom line, I would encourage them to be aware, be in prayer, and involve a trusted friend or counselor if in doubt.

6)  What would you like to relay to your readers or potential readers right now?
    I just hope my readers continue to enjoy getting to know the Whitman family. I’ve tried very hard to make them real, yet good examples despite their human flaws. Most of all, I hope readers see that the reason for any success my characters enjoy is simply Jesus!

7)  What is your favorite novel in this series of five?
    Ha! My favorite is always the one I’m currently working on. But I have a feeling when the series is done and I can be a little more objective about each story, it will be the third book, Another Way Home, that I have a soft spot for in my heart.

8)  Do you keep or share photos of the characters that you write about? Maybe on Instagram?
    I have a Pinterest board with photos of my setting, characters (not all of them yet…showing the characters before all the books are out would give too many spoilers!), and my book covers. I’d love for readers to take a look!
    https://www.pinterest.com/deborahraney/the-chicory-inn-novels-series/

9)  How would you like your readers to contact you?


Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Carrie Turansky’s The Governess of Highland Hall






Carrie Turansky’s The Governess of Highland Hall is set in the Edwardian time period and is quite appealing! I enjoyed my mental vacation to 1911 Berkshire, England. The heroine, Julia Foster, is strong yet feminine – in a perfectly balanced way. Though Julia is young, she emulates amazing character and steadfastness, which is believable because of the missionary lifestyle that she and her family unwillingly left behind. I enjoyed how the skills she’d developed in her beloved India came in handy with her charges in Highland Hall.

Sir William Ramsey, the master of Highland Hall, is a wonderful hero who is dealing with complications that are overwhelming. His fascinating personality and intelligence along with his great heart add much to this story.

This author provided her characters with relational and situational challenges that had me flipping pages and looking forward to what would happen to the characters long into the night. This might sound cliché, but I see that as perfect truth.

The main characters Julia and William along with the other characters such as: Sarah, Clark, Katherine, Andrew and Millie are exactly the type of personalities in which I love to dedicate reading time. This novel is a favorite, which I will enjoy reading again and again. These pages are well written and spiritually, romantically, and historically wholesome and intriguing. Carrie, I applaud you for this delightful and difficult to put down read!


 If you’re looking for clean, entertaining, and uplifting fiction, then let me point you in Carrie Turansky’s direction! Though this is historical fiction there are issues involved in this story that modern day people face each day.  In my opinion—Carrie Turansky is highly recommended!



Questions for Carrie:

1.   Carrie, I love how beautifully you depicted Julia’s spirituality and her struggles. What inspired you to write this character?

Early in 2012 I had a discussion with an editor at a conference, and I asked her what kind of stories she was looking for. Downton Abbey was just becoming popular, and she said she’d love to see a story set in England in the Edwardian Era with a feeling similar to Downton, and perhaps the heroine could be a governess. I liked the idea, but was intimidated by the idea of setting a story in England 100 years ago. But an author friend encouraged me and loaned me some books about that time period. I jumped into the research and fell in love with Edwardian England. The editor’s comments about making the heroine a governess reminded me of Jane Eyre’s story, so I included some elements from that novel. I wanted Julia to have a missionary background, so I remembered reading A Chance to Die, Amy Carmichael’s biography. I reread it and used some of Amy’s experiences as part of Julia’s back story. So Julia is a mixture of ideas and people, and she is one of my favorite heroines.

2.   The historical solutions to problems, whether they are handicaps or hyperactivity, are interesting. Did you know individuals who struggle with these challenges and did you in a way give them voice through the characters of this story?

I’m the mother of two boys and three girls.  They are all grown now, but when they were young we homeschooled them, and four of the five had learning differences that made schooling a challenge. I wove some of those experiences into the story. My husband is also the author of 14 books on parenting, and I’ve been blessed to learn many things from him over the years. The techniques Julia used to help Millie and Andrew come from the Bible, our family, and his books.
 
3.   What do you like to treat yourself to when you are writing—coffee, chocolate, or something else?

I am a tea drinker and enjoy hot tea on cold days and iced tea in the summer months. My favorite tea right now is Stash Meyer Lemon Herbal Tea. Delightful! When I want a treat I make some delicious homemade chocolates using coconut oil, almond butter, and stevia, with a dash of salt. You put it in the freezer to harden up then break it into pieces. Yum!

4.   What was the most difficult novel or novella to write that you have written? Was it an award winner?

I’d say my most challenging novel to write was A Refuge at Highland Hall, which is my latest and the third in the Edwardian Brides Series. It is set during World War One, and I loved the characters and plot, but I had some health challenges that made it difficult to write for a few months. I was really pushing hard to finish all the revisions on time.

5.   You wrote your first story at the age of twelve, did you ever re-write it for publication?

That question made me smile. No, my first story, Passport to Paris, will always stay in the drawer. But it’s a fun to remember coming up with the first story and imaging the two friends on their trip to Paris.

6.   What is the most exciting message you desire to share with your readers?
I always weave spiritual themes into my stories because I want to touch people’s hearts with God’s truth and love. In each book the characters face different challenges, but I do often come back to the healing power of forgiveness and God’s ability to take painful and difficult circumstances and turn them around for good in our lives when we trust Him. Those are wonderful truths that are meaningful to me, and I hope my readers find them exciting and encouraging. 


7.   If you could travel anywhere in the world where would that be?

I love to travel, and I’ve been blessed to travel many places for ministry and for fun: Hawaii, Kenya, Belgium, Holland, France, Switzerland, Germany, England, Scotland, and all around the US. If I could go anywhere, I’d return to England and search out some more lovely settings for my novels. I enjoy visiting historical homes and gardens and learning more about how people lived in the past.

8.   What type of fiction is your favorite to read? To write? (Since you write contemporary and historical.)

I enjoy reading historical and contemporary stories. I think it’s the quality of writing that draws me back to particular authors. I didn’t think I would enjoy reading novels set in the American Colonial period, but I loved Lori Benton’s Burning Sky and Laura Frantz’s The Colonel’s Lady. I like romance and happy endings, so I didn’t think I would like WW2 novels, but I loved Cathy Gohlke’s Saving Amelie and Secret’s She Kept. I’m always looking for books set in England, and I enjoy Julie Klassen’s Regency novels. Right now I’m reading and enjoying Judy Christie’s YA novels, Wreath, A Girl, and Wreath in Summer. It’s the power of the story and quality of the writing that makes the difference for me rather than the genre or time period. I enjoy writing contemporary and historical. And right now English historical seems to be a good fit for me.

9.   How do you wish your readers to contact you?
I enjoy connecting with readers through my website, blog, and email newsletter. I’m active on Facebook and Pinterest, and I pop into GoodReads and Twitter as well.  I hope to meet you there!

Thursday, February 18, 2016






Guard and Edit
Susan M. Kinney
Above all else, guard your heart,  for it is the wellspring of life. 
Proverbs 4:23
The first order of business for writing eye catching and desirable prose, in my opinion, is guarding your heart. “What?” You might wonder if I’ve jumped to a new and unrelated topic. Let me provide an example and explanation.

I heard about an author who knew how to plot and write powerfully. But, try as she might,  she was not selling her story. A friend of hers read the manuscript. At first she couldn’t put a finger on what didn’t sit well with her, when reading those pages. Then realization hit…her dear friend had gone through trials and a divorce. Taking another look at the story she could see powerful words, but they revealed the bitter anger and unforgiveness her friend was experiencing. When a reader came away from those pages, they were left feeling unfulfilled and negative.

The tongue has the power of life and death, and those who love it will eat its fruit. Proverbs 18:21 

What fruit do you love? What do you want to share with others? Do you want your writing to affect another’s life in a positive life-giving way?

Trying in our own strength to be good, to think right, and offer grace to the graceless can be challenging and frustrating. Thankfully, we are not alone for the Lord God Almighty, the Lover of our Souls, has provided aid for our every need. When we look to Him like Moses, Joseph and David as well as Paul, John and Mary we see that their successful journeys were not achieved alone. He was with them, His very presence offering words of encouragement, inspiration, and miracles.  

He causes His sun to rise on the evil and the good, and sends rain on the righteous and the unrighteous. Matthew 5:45 

Everyone experiences trials and pain and disappointments. There are a lot of situations and people we could be bitter and unforgiving toward, but what has our Lord and King make available for us? King David asked, 

“Create in me a pure heart, O God, and renew a steadfast spirit within me. Do not cast me from your presence or take your Holy Spirit from me. Restore to me the joy of your salvation and grant me a willing spirit, to sustain me. Then I will teach transgressors your ways, and sinners will turn back to you. 
Psalms 51: 10 – 13  

Your choice is yours of course, but desiring excellent fruit and a clean heart can only be found when resting and listening and laughing with our Lord, our Bright Morning Star! You may wonder how we guard our heart. We edit attitudes which are not His fruit with His help. The invitation is for all who will receive. So, how is your receiver lately?


Wednesday, February 10, 2016





PENS OF PRAISE
CHRISTIAN WRITER’S GROUP
Next meeting -- Monday 6:30—8:30 p.m.  February15th
at
FAITH CHURCH

2201 42ND Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220
Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods
Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43

Our teaching for Monday, February 15 is called Edits taught by Deborah Ann Erdmann and Kate Jungwirth. Edits are a painful—yet necessary—part of the writing process. However, they polish our writings, giving them a glow we would not have otherwise seen.

The prompt you are invited to write to is called, Short and Sweet! You are invited to write a short and sweet story to savor and possibly share with our group. (Only if you want to!)  A page or two would be sufficient. We will also share the Uganda orphans’ writings that Debby acquired during her visit.

Disclaimer: Warning you may end up loving to write!
Visit a local shop and bring your coffee or cappuccino with you.
Let us know if you’re attending so that we can save a seat just for you.
If you have questions or concerns let us know.

God’s blessings upon you as you write for His glory!

Wednesday, January 13, 2016

PENS OF PRAISE CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP






PENS OF PRAISE
CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP

Faith Church
2201  42nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220

Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods
Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43

       January 18, 2016
      Monday 6:30 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.

    Social Media Can Sparkle!

Alesha Mueller, Serena Kreie, and Spencer John will provide training on social media techniques for those of us who have teased the internet with limited attention and for those of us who have not ventured far into the vast WEB
opportunities available to writers.
They will show us tweeting, Pinterest, Google+, and what one does with widgets!
Who knows what else is out there??? Oh, these three know and we are about to!
Bring your computer if you have a lap top. Otherwise, we will share.

Prompt for January is:
The unexpected….that is all I’m giving to you on that one! Let’s see how creative you can be!

You are welcome to bring your latest WIP, or work in progress, for a five-minute reading but this is not required to attend our meetings.

Don’t forget to visit one of our local shops and bring your coffee or cappuccino with you. Let us know if you can attend the February meeting so we can save a special spot for you!

If you have questions or concerns call Becky McLafferty at (920)758-9196 or       e-mail her at mclafferty@lakefield.net or call Susan Kinney at (920)242-3631 or   e-mail her at cal-suek@charter.net or susanmarlenekinney@gmail.com.

May God bless you richly and always as you write for His glory!

Monday, January 4, 2016

Her Deadly Inheritance by Beth Ann Ziarnik



I was privileged to read a complimentary copy of Beth Ziarnik’s debut contemporary novel, Her Deadly Inheritance, set in Grand Island, Michigan. I enjoy reading about ‘real location’ novels. Beth skillfully brought me to Grand Island and Williams Landing without overdoing the description, instead allowing me to experience the flavor of life and neighborhood in this Lake Superior town. I also love historical homes and Windtop allowed me to step inside a while, instead of driving by in my car and admiring such beauty from the curb.

 Reading  Her Deadly Inheritance kept my interest because I quickly grew concerned for the main characters and wondered what would happen to them next. Her likable characters are oh-so-likable and her ‘questionable’ characters, or shall I refer to them as difficult ones, are very unlikeable! My favorite personalities from this story are Jill Shepherd, Clay Merrick, Amelia and Mrs. Fenton. And I can’t forget Button! Let’s not forget Button! Tia gripped my heart and where, oh where, did Beth find such a cool name for a character?

I may have met a few ‘Lenore’ type people in my life before, or could I say individuals headed down the same road, concerning attitude and focus! I appreciated that there was real reason for the romantic thread between Jill and Clay. I dislike stories that base the ‘attraction’ on the fact that the characters are in the story crisis at that time and place. Beth developed the romantic relationship with a believable connection that peppered my interest and kept me turning pages and hoping for a positive outcome. 

 I enjoyed the mysterious suspense woven nicely throughout the story. The biggest chunk of my heart cleaves to historical stories and Beth seasons her contemporary story with a touch of this.  I applaud Beth for keeping the suspense and surprise rolling throughout the novel, yes, all the way to the end. This is an enjoyable fast read with hometown warmth that embraced my heart. The spiritual thread was refreshing; for there is always a deeper level in stories that includes this real part of our life experience. Calling all fans of Christian, romantic suspense, this is a novel for you and I highly recommend Her Deadly Inheritance, a debut novel by Beth Ziarnik. I found myself comparing Beth’s storytelling to Colleen Cobel’s novels. So, if you are a Colleen Cobel fan then I believe you will enjoy Beth’s novel, Her Deadly Inheritance.

1)      Beth, your characters are, well, shall we say— the likeable ones are very likable and the not likeable ones so unlikable! It is so important for me to like someone in the novel and you succeeded wonderfully well. How did you come up with your main characters?
First of all, Sue, thank you for hosting me on your blog. I'm delighted to be here. As for my main characters--Jill and Clay, I started with the question, "What if?" What if someone my Main Character loved was murdered, and loopholes in the law prevented the criminal from being brought to justice? How would my Main Character handle that? Would being Christian make a difference? If so, how? If not, why?  As I thought about this, various scenes and snippets of dialogue and action materialized. I wrote them down, coming to know Jill and Clay as I observed them. I later discovered this unusual pattern marks me as a seat-of-the-pants writer. I just sit down at my computer and write without knowing a whole lot until it unfolds in the telling of the story. I don't understand how or why this works. I just know it does.

2)      I remember you talking about the location for this  novel. Tell us your favorite memory from when you researched this novel. Her Deadly Inheritance takes place in Michigan's Upper Peninsula at Munising and Grand Island during the weeks around the Fourth of July. My husband Jim and I explored the setting twice, loving the beautiful rock formations, lakes, and historical buildings on the wilderness island. As Dave Worel, then the park ranger, guided us around the island, we experienced the downpour that catches Jill during a key scene at Echo Lake near the heart of Grand Island. We visited the serenity of the historic island cemetery which I use in the story, and Dave also took us to the best location for Jill's fictional, historical house. The three of us exploring that island was so exciting.

3)      Tell us your next favorite memory or fact about your research trip.
On our first research trip, Jim & I rented a small cabin in Munising. The first night, a huge thunderstorm came crashing down and lasted for quite some time. We were safe in the cabin, but the din was so loud that we couldn't hear each other no matter how close we stood. We learned the next day that a fierce storm like that one could break in two the great ships, carrying iron ore on Lake Superior. Also that anyone drowning will not rise to the surface. Bodies freeze quickly and rest on the bottom of that deep lake. If ever found, they can be thawed and processed for a funeral even years later. All this information came in handy in Jill and Clay's story.

4)      I love the varying spiritual maturity or lack thereof in your  characters. Who emulates your favorite spiritual journey in your novel.
Jill does, as she desperately tries to do what she believes is right and often fails. Yet she picks herself up and tries again, not realizing she is actually making progress--until the very end.

5)      Who are your favorite authors? (I noticed that you have mystery and suspense in with your romance novel.)
These days, I love the works of many Christian authors. But years ago, it was Phyllis A, Whitney for romantic suspense and Grace Livingston Hill for Christian romance. I ate up the works of both authors like candy. Mrs. Whitney's books gave me my love for romantic suspense long before Christian publishers were interested in the genre. Her novels and articles on how to write romantic suspense also gave me a head start on the "how-to" of the genre. Mrs. Hill's stories taught me the beauty of what love could be between Christian heroes and heroines. Both authors have influenced how I write through the lives and hearts of my 21st Century characters.

6)      What advice would you like to give a reader who relates to Tia?
Jill's younger cousin struggles with a lot of issues, not the least of which is her deeply flawed relationship with her mother. My advice to a reader who might relate to Tia is to realize that God always knows the best path to your healing--even if a relationship never becomes what you believe it should, or dream it could, be. 

7)       The cover is absolutely lovely! Were you allowed to be involved in the selection of art used to represent your novel?
Thank you, Sue. The design artists at Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas sure did a super job. They asked me to supply information about mood and what elements I'd prefer--like the house and the heroine. My editor asked what I thought of the first version. Though that cover was close, it needed a more delicate-looking Jill. Next, I was offered two versions of the new cover, one with and one without color. After an online vote, the outcome was so close that the choice landed in my lap again. Yikes! I loved them both, but as I prayed, the color version kept grabbing my attention. I'm glad I went with that one. I love it and hope readers will, too.

8)      Why did you pick the Fourth of July as a focus event for your novel.
Munising's old-fashioned and colorful Fourth of July celebration had so many useful elements, and it was "near the anniversary" of the tragic death of Jill's mother three years before. Can I also confess that I am unashamedly patriotic? I love our country and what our forefathers forged and fought to birth as a nation. I love that it grew to free the slaves and give women the vote. I love that its Armed Forces are willing to fight for our freedom and that of others. We have a lot to celebrate.

9)      What is your favorite social media? (FB, Pinterest, Twitter etc.?)
I enjoy Facebook. It gives me a chance to chat with family and friends. They amaze me with their enthusiasm about my novel and are just plain fun to be around. Maybe I'll like other forms of social media as I learn how to use them, but for now, it's Facebook. As of last week I now have two pages--the one I started with at facebook.com/beth.ziarnik and my newest one for especially for romantic suspense fans at facebook.com/authorBethAnnZiarnik.

10)   What is your favorite recipe? Would you like to share it or do you have plans to share it on a mailing? Do people need to give you their email for you to share it with them?
Oven Beef/Venison Stew from an old Homes & Gardens recipe book I picked up free at a supermarket years ago. It's basically chunks of meat, carrots, potatoes and onion (lots more onion, if using vension), and a condensed cream of tomato soup partially diluted as the sauce. Add whatever salt and pepper you prefer. Mix it all up in a roaster, and bake covered at 350 degrees for about two to two-and-a half hours. When the meat is fall-apart tender, it's done. I think that's what Amelia shared with Jill in one of the scenes in Her Deadly Inheritance. Good idea, Sue, I think I will share the recipe online at my new Facebook page.. 

      11)  Is there anything else you would like to say to your readers?
Well, yes. I have a confession. For Jill's fictional house on Grand Island--the one she inherited, I borrowed Mark Twain's fabulous house in Connecticut. I made a few changes to suit my story, but otherwise a lot of the features are the same. You can google "Mark Twain's house" and find a link to its website. Once there, you can explore the house online. I am a great fan of architecture, especially huge, old houses with lots of nooks and crannies, and this house is one of the best. Maybe sometime, I'll get to see it in person.

12) How do you wish for your readers to contact you?
·   They can email me through my website at www.bethziarnik.com
·   Beth Ann Ziarnik comment-reply@wordpress.com

Thanks again for hosting me, Sue. It's been fun, and I hope to see you soon!